Yeah, it's a high-stakes environment. But when you're applying to the school of your dreams, your dreams can get the best of you. Here's what not to do:

File this under things never to do in your life, like wearing socks with sandals.
1. Bribes. We've all heard the stories of the kid who stapled the twenty (or the hundred) to his application and waltzed in. Generally speaking, I'm guessing your spot is worth a whole lot more than you can afford to the other several thousand applicants sitting in the pile. Save your paper route money and think about upping the ante with your essays rather than with your ante.
2. The down-and-dirty essay. We all know how desperate you can feel. But addressing the admissions officer like he's your bro can give you more headaches than easy ins. Try not to tell the awesome party story, try not to mention the police, try not to begin paragraphs with the single-word sentence, "Look." I know you dress to impress, but let's maintain some semblance of formality here. The person reading your essay is likely wearing a tie.
3. An essay about how awesome you are. My including this may seem like a trick. Even, perchance, a snarky bit of round-a-bout. All essays are implicitly about how awesome you are. Of course. But if you say things like "I don't want to sound arrogant," you are. You really, really are. Find a way to slip in how incredibly awesome you are by describing what you do rather than how you are.
The college essay can be a bit of a minefield so keep plugging along, and remember, this ought to be the first piece of writing you do ten drafts on. Then, after you've wrapped out draft no. 10, you have finally figured out what the essay is about. Now you can begin.





